The Sky
The Sky
Like a deep ocean above us
Like a playground for stars
Like a big blue bed with clouds for pillows
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I think that you had good detail and it was spectacular.One qestion though,why did you call it an ocean if it is also black
I realy love how you called the sky a deep sea.
What is your favourite part about the sky?
I personally think that you can mabey get some more lines in otherwise your poem is relly good welldone
Harrison and Max.