You are…by Roxy
You are a football waiting to be kicked in the galaxy net.
You are a shining star brightening up the misty sky.
You are the memory of a giant stepping into a dark, gloomy room.
You are the missing number on a bingo card waiting to be called.
You are a pea buried under blankets waiting to be found by a prince.
You are perfectly prepared paint pad ready to dab your masterpiece.
You are an agile, anxious alligator, ready to explore the swamp of hell.
You are radiant fish swimming slowly into the deep, dank gloomy water where the posh fish stay and the sharks stay.
Hi Roxie we are keira and Connie
1. We really like how you included a story book.
2. What made you think that a giants room would be gloomy?
3. In the last paragraph we think you didn’t really need to use the second stay you could have just put You are radiant fish swimming slowly into the deep, dank gloomy water where the posh fish stay and the sharks.