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2 Responses to “Haiku poems by …. Harrison”

  1. Hi Harrison
    1. I really like the line “bonfires drift in the sky”.
    2. On the line “children collect sweets” what type of sweets are they?
    3.on the line the taste of sweets in my mouth maybe you can put the taste of Cotten candy melting in my mouth
    Jax and Zoe

  2. Hi Harrison
    I absolutely love the line “snow freezing to ice”
    Why have you used the line “ the sun heating the Earth “ ?
    You could put the line “ children collect sweets “ before the line “ the taste of sweets in my mouth “

    Well done Harrison

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