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Seasonal Haiku by Daisy

Bitter cold weather,

Makes the snow fall,

With joyful snow fights.

Christmas carol’s echo,

Christmas dinner on the table,

The smell of Brussel sprouts.

 

The smell of pumpkin spice,

Wanders through the air,

With ghosts following.

 

Leaves falling down,

Trees blank with no cover,

Waiting for summer to come. 

 

2 Responses to “Seasonal Haiku by Daisy”

  1. Hi Daisy
    1.I really Like the line bitter cold weather.
    2. Where did you get the idea from?
    3. You could say something like this… “you could feel the bitter cold weather on my body.” Your’e amazing keep up with the hard work.

  2. Casey and Caiden October 22, 2020 at 10:41 am

    Hi Daisy
    Nice to meet you, our names are Casey and Caiden
    1. We really like the line “….. with ghosts following….”
    2. who are the ghosts following?
    3. Maybe you can tell the reader why they are following and who they are following
    Good job have a nice day .

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