Suspense by Erin

All night long the thunder roared, Zoe was shivering with fright, even though nothing would get her she was still scared. Zoe ran through the fields, thump…thump… thump, something was following her she started to run faster and faster, not daring to look back, thump thump, thump, crash! Zoe immediately turned over to see and…-thump, thump thump another one came and another. She curled up into a ball, her skin tightly wrapping around her and, nothing came they all disappeared;she toddled off and ran through the fields again and then- thump… thump…thump, she saw a row of red eyes glaring at her, a squirming rat sped off and..she was alone,with them.

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