THE AIR SHIP!
Laura had looked all around the dark scary room, checking she had left none of her old dirty clothes all scattered along the mucky floor. This could be the greatest day if her life! Getting to travel the world on a sky ship, AND FOR FREE! This was her dream. She had always wanted to taste pizza from Italy, baguette from France, sushi from China. Ahhh she just pictures her next to the Eiffel Tower taking pictures to show her family and make them extremely jealous… haha! She really was excited. Never had she felt butterflies in her stomach this often, alought she was a little nervous, she was doubting herself. She had to drive a sky ship! All by herself. I mean you need to have talent to do that. Plus, it’s a 90,000-pound sky ship. I mean that got to be heavy! As the day went on Laura began to realise it’s all ok! I’m going to travel the world. Nothing can be more exciting than that!
Laura walked cautiously towards the humungous sky ship; she was in shock about how big the sky ship was! She looked around the sky ship, it has dark grey steel walls with huge windows the size of tv’s. The moment she walked in that sky ship she knew this is where I’m meant to be. She went to the pilot’s cockpit, it was huge. With vending machines, huge steering wheels, chairs to comfortable you could relax in them all day! The chairs were leather. It seemed to be an awful fancy sky ship! Which in a way was really a good thing? Suddenly Laura heard footsteps, a tall man in a suit walked in! Who are you exclaimed Laura?! I’m your butler madam, replied the tall man politely. Oh sorry, I never knew I had a butler. I’m living the 1st class life thought Laura! What can I get you? Asked the man. A coca cola, replied Laura gratefully. You can call me Paul, he replied.
It was only a couple seconds until the sky ship took off! 10,9,8,7,6,5,4,3,2,1, TAKE OFF! And off they went. The gigantic sky ship lifted off the hard concrete one second they were inches above the floor and the next minute they were almost in space! Wow, thought Laura. This ship goes fast. Yes, replied Paul, we have the best fuels you can get in this country, only for the best! Laura felt like royalty. She’d never lived this kind of life before. When she was a kid, she had 8 brothers! That must have been hard. 8 boys making a mess, wow no wonder she had A LOT of chores. So, this was a huge change considering someone done something for her.
All of a sudden… the sky ship, it was shaking. Laura was too busy thinking about how good it was in the sky ship she forgot to control the sky ship! AHH, Laura was basically wasting her time, instead of screaming she should be steering! Laura gripped her hand on the steering wheel, and began steering. Where are we going Laura screamed? I don’t know replied Paul in fear, you’re the pilot! Yes, ok I know that Paul. You’re not really, helping. The ship began to straighten, it wasn’t too well, all over the place! Where would you like to go Paul, asked Laura. To the magic land of fairies and goblins, Paul replied. What? Where’s that Laura asked in confusion? You don’t know where that is, I’m shocked! Let me steer, said Paul. Ok… said Laura in doubt.
The next thing Laura knew, they were in the middle of nowhere, where on earth are, we? Asked Laura. The magic land of fairies and goblins! Oh, it’s… stunning. Yes, of course it is. Suddenly Laura’s coat began to lift off her shoulder’s. Who is that?! It’s ok, it’s one of the fairies. That fairy is Blueberry. Well, hello blueberry. Blueberry was too small for Laura to shake her hand, so Laura just picked her up and hugged her. Laura and Paul had become great friends, they went mountain climbing, painting, looking for goblins, meeting up with fairies, having tea parties with fairy’s, goblins and more mythical creatures. But nothing could be more fun than going to a fairies Birthday party! They shared a bunk bed in fairy Jessica’s house. They were friend’s forever. The end.
I really love this story and I love the take off section in the 3rd paragraph but why did you pick fairies and goblins, I spotted one thing that was wrong in the 4th paragraph there was no speech marks.
This is a good piece! What made you think of this? Remember to use ambitious vocabulary!