The disaster of the unicorn’s horn!
Finally the baby unicorn’s horn is better and Allen and Wenny are happy for it. Suddenly a huge bash makes the wind howl and a noise was like a neigh. Allen hid as fast as he could. Wenny told him not to be a scardy cat until we find out about it. Allen exclaimed it might be the unicorn’s mother! But all of a sudden a human came towards them. His name was Captine Taller. He told them to not worry about the scary noise. Captine Taller told them its not the creatures mother its just hi experiment, nothing to worry about. Then he drove of leaving them with the unicorn which they were fine with. They dreamed at dawn about that there scared what would happen tomorrow with the unicorn.
I like what you wrote and do you like Unicorns. I think your very creative and positive.
Wow I really enjoyed that it was very mysterious and I could very clearly Imagine it. How did you think of such good ideas? Could you improve on having a better ending?