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Through the door

Through the door

 

In the shack held all of John’s dreams: an apple computer with two monitors, a captains bed and his very own underground base with military equipment.As well as that there were 2 pugs, 7 fish and a turtle. When John approached the kitchen he was bewildered. There was his family! When John was young he got separated from his family. He got put on the street and that is why he is not scared of anything. Everything but one thing. Losing his family forever. But when he went closer he realised it was just a hologram.

 

“Hello?” said John. All he heard was a gust of wind. He was expecting a person or at least something. He went into the living room, only a tv and a chair. He went to the bathroom, only a toilet and a sink. Then Wagna crashed through the window, his beak open as big as a lion’s and his claws thrashed at John. John ran out of the house and to the door. But it was not there.

One Response to “Through the door”

  1. -Hello, great chapter 3! I like your use of vocabulary and how you have described your story so specific I can almost imagine myself being there.
    -How would he escape? Wow, I’m not to sure. Lovely cliff hanger!
    -Maybe you should add something about maybe Wagma on the computer screen losing signal as he tries and tells you to run. Though, that is all up to you.

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