Visit Neverbelieve Island by Ria
Do your family seek the adventure of enchantment? Are your children ever bored at the weekend?
Are you ready for an experience of a lifetime?
If yes then this is your chance to shine!
Enjoy an experience in the jewel jelly restaurant!
Be an explorer in dwarf farm.
Rest in the mushroom cabins!
Come to the teleporters of Britain!
Sail over the Crystal River.
Have your ever met mystical Ramsey, if not then this your chance!You can get the finest jelly you’ve ever seen, your waitress is moving jelly.
Are you ready to see the secrets of dwarf farm? We have scarecrows as farmers, over a hundred animals and a dragon you can ride on!
Do you love plants? If yes then we think you will like our mushroom cabins!You will sleep on the softest vines on earth and fairies as pets.
Us magical creatures love to go all around the world so we invented “ The teleporters of Britain”.
If you want to book this adventure then please contact 07769503219.
I like the part where it says”us majical creatures love to go around the world”many nextime don’t but your questions in bullet points.
I love the jewel jelly restaurant, it sounds very interesting.
Very good liked the name jewel jelly. If the farm is called dwarf farm why aren’t the any dwarfs there?
I love your idea of the teleport to Britain and sail over the crystal river
If you were to name this post something else what would you name it?
Instead of putting you can ride on dragons why didn’t you put you could ride on “an adjective” dragons
Thank you so much Gracie I think I would call it ” a one an a lifetime experience ” thanks for the suggestion I will definitely do that for my future stories!!
I love how you made it like an ad.
What did you mean by britain teleporters?
Next time try not to put all the questions on different lines
Thank you all so much for the comments!!! my favourite
place is the jewel jelly restaurant too! I got the idea because it was nearly Donner time and I remembered that it was jelly for desert and I couldn’t stop thinking about it so I thought I illl put in my writing!!
Just curious, do you write your story at home?
Can I go here? Asking for a friend.
This is so good and I like how you made it stand out and say “If yes then this is your time to shine!”
I have no question and I suggest to make it in a few paragraphs like form them together and combine them and “ “
Amazing writing ✍️
Maybe you could add a bit more description ?
You could maybe do a bit more writing and maybe call the title something else.
Thank you all so much for the comments! By the way I wrote this at school, This is an imaginative place so sadly you can’t go. Thanks for the improvements everyone bye!