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Spider

7:00 AM- Outside, a raged of claws. Lighting was CHARGING every minute, powers of light reached across the steamy dark sky and thunder growled overhead. All of a sudden a whole loads of dash rain dropped. Outside, we tried to find a house or a building to hide, we kept searching and searching in till  we found an abandoned building. It was just me, and there was a lot of shadows out of nowhere. I was desperately in fear, but there was nothing else here just the broken house. Just at the point  I went in because there was nowhere to hide. Inside, When we in there was rocking chairs, cracked walls and cobwebs everywhere, I was feeling terrified but I had to hide. I kept walking and walking,*Thinking*- about what was going to happen to me and if this was a good idea.*feeling* cold and unsafe. I walked and walked after that, I notices that there was NO ESCAPE

I WAS TRAPPED I was feeling fearless and crushed. I went back and I think that’s was not a good idea because there was still no escape than, I saw a shadow it was massive and had pointy claws that was about to scratch me, I had ran out of luck now. When I turned forward I saw dark red eyes appeared in the darkest and had black with red BLOODY fur, and had EIGHT LEGS on each side AND IT WAS A SPIDER!!!

Wolf

On the outskirts of London, thunder and lightning were both booming down from heaven. The rain was cold and damp, as it poured down frantically. It was 8pm in the afternoon, and the sun was setting. As Adam walked, he thought to himself “I need to find somewhere to stay, or I’ll get wet”. After 5 minutes, Adam found an abandoned home. He spotted an alleyway digging through the two buildings. Adam hid in one of the two corners and fell asleep. 

 

When he woke up footsteps were heard. He froze in fear. He felt like his heart had stopped pumping!!. Suddenly, the mysterious man spotted Adam… the man walked towards Adam, the more the man walked, the more Adam backed up. Especially with that blood dripping knife of his. Adam’s hope was fading,his heart was slowing down he was TRAPPED!!!. But he could sense something above his head, he looked up and saw two blinking, orange eyes. Adam was petrified. Soon Adam was looking up at a wet, black nose and two ears. In a flash the beast jumped down, and was one meter away from Adam. The beast howled AaaaaWwwwwOoooooHhhhhhhh!!! the beastly man fled as fast as his legs would carry him. Adam was shocked- who was this animal… and why was it saving him?

As the animal stood there, the lightning revealed more of it.

The Mysterious Beast

Sally realised guards were chasing her. She got into a rush so she started to pick up a pace. Unfortunately rain started to hammer down on the ground, she got drenched. “I think I picked the wrong day to go around town.” Sally thought to herself, “maybe is should find a way to get home.” Just as Sally thought all hope was lost she suddenly glimpsed something. It was old, there was shattered glass everywhere, it wasn’t much but she was great full to find a shelter so she hid in there.” Well I might as well stay here tonight” she thought out loud hoping someone had heard her. Suddenly lightning bolted, because of that Sally hid under a table.

There were large, fresh cobwebs from a spider along with huge dark cracks all around the walls and there were many old dusty books scattered around the broken floorboards.

Until she looked back she realised that the doors had all locked. She was trapped!

She started thinking ‘how do I get out?’ when the noisiest roar she had ever heard hit her ear. A slash of lightning struck, Sally got frightened and hugged herself as tight as she could. At that very moment, a light shone and Sally saw a glimpse of large teeth coming her way. Sally shuddered as a long gush of wind hit her.” W -w-w what are you?” she stuttered.

 “That I must not tell.” Replied the mysterious creature.

Sally then asked “Can I trust you?” the creature didn’t give an answer, but shook her fur. It was some sort of snake beast Sally realised when the beast turned the light on.

Sally had never seen It before.

The Beast

Outside rain pounded on to the dark streets of London. Inside there were cobwebs in every single corner and a old grandfather clock that loomed above Philip as he sat on a rusty chair. Philip realised that there was a hooded man standing right behind him,he was following Philip. Philip sprinted as fast as his legs would carry him, he glanced at the man he was clutching a knife. Philip stopped there was a wall. The only way out was the way in. He was trapped. the man spoke.

“Give me the parcel or things will not be good for you.” He threatened. Pointing at the knife. Suddenly when all hope seemed to be lost something jumped out behind a pole and started hissing violently at the man. It had dark green scales and a fork like tonge. The man screamed and fled. Though Philip was so paralysed with fear to notice that it was a enormous snake but when he did he Philip realised it was wounded. All of Philip’s fear washed away and he slowly crept forwards to the snake and picked him up gently. Then the snake spoke gravelly 

“They will be back.”

Philip suddenly had the urge to guard this animal with his life.

Lion

Chapter 2

It was late in the afternoon. There was heavy rain Thunder and lightning roared and shone brightly. Looking for a place which was there. He could see scraps of metal, spiders webs and a dusty chair and also a dark shadow. There was a deep groan and the two sharp paws came to separate him and the man. The man was  intimidated that he sprinted away. The boy was was paralysed rite on his spot he could not move he couldn’t believe or even breath. He was just flabbergasted. suddenly a flash of lightning struck and without a warning he saw a giant mane and a tanish colour of fur. There was a cut … he touched it and blood was on his hand.

Snake

It turned into a sad rainy night with the raging wind slashing across the city and Adam hadn’t reached his destination yet, the further he walked the more it was turning into an abandoned town, and the creepier it became.

”Hand me that bag!” demanded a voice out of nowhere, his shadow towered over Adam and he knew this wasn’t good. Suddenly the unknown man pulled out a sharp, white, glistening knife and walked towards him, slowly, each step made him quiver. At that moment Adam dashed try to find a place to hide, although there was nowhere, except an old rusty house that it looked like it had been hit by a bolder. It was life or death so he darted inside and swung the worn out door. Outside the lightning bolted down and thunder slashed as rain hammered, The mist circled the house like the weather was against him. Adam was terrified for his life,  he flashed around in an endless maze of ancient doors.

”Get back here now, no one escapes from me!” shouted the man  Adam glanced at the man, he was grinning. He noticed this creepy building was really ancient, like made in the 80’s. The furious wind seeped into the broken windows and made an icy breeze along his face. The some of many trash bags were left here to rot, with a sound of buzzing bugs eating the rotten food, and a shadow that seemed to move itself that frightened Adam and pipes which were rusty and they led to nowhere, some pipes leaking with water and even exploding. He fled around almost having a panic attack, his heart pounding, clammy hands, terrified of what would come next if he didn’t find an exit. He attempted to comfort himself but none of it worked. Stressed, he was now shivering, scrambling around cluelessly and rooms became darker and darker. As he sprinted the walls caved in, Adam froze in place, it was a dead end! He shut his eyes as tight as he could, not knowing what would happen now.

”No one escapes me!” shouted the man, walking closer and closer. “Woah, um uh what are you?” The man instantly fled through the building and shouted as he dashed. For a moment Adam felt happy until, he noticed a giant shadow towering over him and a sound that he had never heard of before. His mind was spinning wondering, what would terrify a man with a knife? By now his mind was filled with horrible thoughts but he shook them of and took the risk of turning around. Slowly, the body emerged out the darkness, a massive tail appeared, one by one revealing each dry scale. A thin, damp, smelly fork-like tongue came to him, almost licking him. By doing that the he saw its wet fangs that were like a jagged claw of blades. This unidentified creature had not killed him yet, surprising, it seemed to admire him.

Panther chapter two

Outside hail crashed down like a bomb meanwhile Bryan was darting as fast as he can around but then stopped . The man was catching up to him he had nothing option but to let himself fall into the darkness . Bryan relentlessly running through the factory he leaped onto discarded machinery ,darted around books and jumped over ripped shoes .It was a dead end it was hard to see in the pitch black factory … and there was no was out of the the dark place .Suddenly a snarling sound came from the corner two furious yellow eyes . A sweet smell of sunflowers ran through the air .Hundreds of white teeth as point as the knife . Black fur as black as the night . Bryan had no clue what it was but it let back it’s head and roared louder that any sound he heard before . The man shrieked and scrambled away . The animal was a panther !

Chapter 2

Chapter 2
Jack shot off like the wind! Lightning flashed like a light Bulb being turned on and off. People looked surprised. Soon the path became rocky. Suddenly he tripped. he landed in the corner of a garbage site shattered windows, mouldy cupboards and broken tables. Rotten Wood lay on the floor. The man loaded his rifle. Was it was over for Jack? A few heart stopping moments later he saw two eyes, the eyes blinked. Suddenly something pounced! Glistening teeth glowed like the moon. Yellowish in colour. An orange mane around his head. And cat’s like claws. At that time he roared a roar as loud as dinosaurs, that roar can be heard from mars. At that moment the man dashed off in thunderous streets of London. Jack was about to sprint off with him too but he couldn’t. “Hello there I am a lion” Jack was very confused. “A lion but there extinct how is this even possible!” He exclaimed
“I am the only lion and I must survive or we WILL be extinct.” The lion replied. Eventually Jack noticed a wound on the lion’s leg.
“I want you to be alive I want you to survive I will do anything for you” Jack tried to sound serious but couldn’t keep the excitement out of his voice.
“Ok” the lion roared

Chapter 1

It was a cloudy day in January. The fog floated round the corner in Troon. The light when out at exactly 3.00 am the very strong wind was blazing round corners.

 

Monica Mcdonald ignored the very strong wind. She was staring at the checkpoint he was very nervous to go up to the checkpoint, he pulled his coat closer and looked at the floor.

 

He could see the soldiers standing there in  brick little building,  “Next” Yelled the guard, stamping his feet, He pulled out his sword

 Then she handed over her pass to the guard “where do you think you are going little boy?” He yelled, While giving Monica a very dark stare.

 

” I’m just dropping off some tools for my dad ” Monica replied, Smiling as best as he could. The guard smelling her breath.

 

One moment later, Monica was walking through the top of the town,

Then she heard some people taking talking down a dark Alloway, then she walked down it. Then out of nowhere she got grabbed by a man with a ski mask and all black clothes, “you’re coming with me he said !” and then she got took into a dump. Then they heard a howl, then a white and fluffy the animal came out from the shadows and ran at the guy in the ski masks he threw me up in the air and the wolf caught me as I was falling.

 

And then I said ” thank you so much for catching me ” then the wolf replied ” no problem ” ” wait you can talk?”  ” only for you he whispered ”  ” you need to get out of here because that guy will get the guards so we better go. 

Tyger

Chapter 1

 

It was a windy afternoon there was snow everywhere in December the snow drifted down.in The darken streets of strouk.

 

A few street lights had been lit,shadows In places you did’t know exsest.

 

Sundly the snow from earlier apped but this time it grou when the sky was clear.Joseph ignored how different the was!!! Soon Joseph’s friend Adem

 

Exsplored the deep deps of the forest Adem herd a noes so he sprinted froo

The forest but Adem was to SLOW!!! A tyger apped🐯 Adem was terrified but

 

But a hunter shot the tyger with his crossbow. A few days later the tyger was heeld Joseph and Adam had a lot of fun