the house

After a year had past,Zoes hair flowed like water .Zoe had been laying on the beach all day.She wondered where all the people were but then she realised it was a school day and rushed into school.Sorry miss I forgot it was school today mumbeled Zoe staring at the wall trying not to be embarresed .Out of the window there was so many trees you could hardly see the road…

One Response to “the house”

  1. Hello Finn very good piece of work, but just remember to put a capital letter for the title and after embarrassed put the full stop not before the out.

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