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The Airship

Ava  gripped the airship as the airship was soaring in the air, Jack The Twin Brother of Ava  , had been more stronger and bolder than Ava , who was more worryful than Jack , They had a dog called Marley who could produce shields when Jack And Ava was  in trouble . Suddenly, Dragons, (X~CLASS) Had sharp Teeth, Enormous claws and wings but The Tail was so dangerous that it can kill you in one swing . They attacked and then we crash landed on an island that I thought Ava saved me but Marley laying down, he woke up with his shield half broken, Then i remembered my fall , He put his shield up to save us . Now we are stranded.

One Response to “The Airship”

  1. I really like that the page was punctuated correctly. Maybe next time split it into more paragraphs. Also like the way the Writing flows.

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