My skyship adventure by Axel SWW
You’ve probably been on a skyship adventure when the sky is full of cotton clouds and the rising sun in the morning. You have also probably been on a skyship when the sky is really sunny, it helps the engines when it is really windy because you have the wind also pushing you. Its nice to see all the fields and houses that look like mice.
I bet you enjoyed the thrill of being up high and seeing the birds right by your side, knowing that when you landed to your destination that it will be a wonderful flight back.
But you should try and fly a skyship when the sky is full of rain that is pounding down into the floor. Have you tried to fly a skyship when the sky is all dark and you only have a compass?
Harold held one of the railings on the side of the ship, he was scared of heights. Whilst Erica was flying the ship Harold was looking at the world below them, it looked like ants, when they got to a island that looked like a good place to get food. Then they realised it was an abandoned village.
1.Hi! I really liked your title and when you were speaking to the author about your adventure!
2.Why did you decide top speak to the author?
3.A little improvement would be to add a little bit of more suspence! I really enjoyed reading thank you!!
very good work love your suspense .