You are who you think you are, poem by Jake SWW
1) You are a fluffy pillow my calmer when I am sad.
2) You are as cold as ice and snow freezed twice in a freezer.
3)You are as loud as the computers keyboard click.
4) You are as sharp minded as a freshly sharpened pencil.
5) You are as bright as 5 mirrors reflecting into my eyes.
6) You are the sound of the a bus’s breaks and a fishes gulp.
7) You are as thirsty as samon out of water.
8) You are the person you are.
I love the ending sentence! Very nice!
Can you describe some places?
I would suggest to maybe add some more lovely sentences!
Nothing individually stood out as it was all brilliant
1) “You are the person you are.” is a lovely saying as it is personal.
2) What made you come with the idea?
3) Try and add more description
I like your 4 poem It is really clever
What made you think of the idea for this particular poem.