The Crystal Dragon
The Crystal Dragon
As she soars in the sky
her crystal spikes shimmer in
the sunlight,
She breaths out covering
every landscape with her glittering
jewels,
She dives down until she reaches
her gloomy cave illuminated
with with crystals,
Her wings cave around her
younglings and feeds them until
their full,
She peers down at them with
her phoenix like face and
soars off into the distance with
her sea patterned wings,
Her scaly spiked tail swishes this way
that whilst she searches with her
emerald like eye,
She roars, showing her pearly white
teeth and breathing her crisp
cold morning breath,
She lands, her ebony blue talons
sinking into the ground whilst
she slurps from a sparkling river,
As she takes off again she flies
over rivers and streams,
lush green fields, hopping
hares and landscapes of lilies,
And as she reaches home at last
exhausted but refreshed, she tucks
in her younglings and falls into sweet
dreams…
You have created a charming story about your dragon with some powerful images Fleur, well done!
fleur i found your poem really cool and I liked how you came up with an original idea for each verse about your dragon
Love your poem flure, I love the cave being illuminated with crystals. what made you choose a crystal dragon?
Well done Fleur! i love your poem, especially the start. It is fantastic.
i really like your poem
To.answer.your.question.Erin.I.was.thinking.of.doing.an.ice.dragon.but.as.I.was.looking.at.some.pictures.on.google.and.a.crystal.one.caught.my.eye.and.then.I.found.the.perfect.picture.and.that.gave.me.the.inspration!
Also.thank.you.for.all.your.amazing.comments!!!
Dear Fleur,
I really enjoyed your poem.
Each new verse added an additional layer to a rich picture. I especially loved the ending, where you imply the gentleness of the mother dragon, through her actions rather than by explicitly stating it. This is a powerful technique but also provides a super contrast.
Well done!
Mrs. H
What a wonderful poem, Fleur. I like how you have told the story of your dragon through your descriptions. I like the contrasts in some of your images, e.g. ‘gloomy cave’ yet ‘illuminated with crystals’.