You are lots of things
You are lots of things
You are the impossibility of dark matter
You are the sound of birds singing and waves crashing
You are the light shining
You are the memory of a lost child inhaling in death
You are are the smell of a hope’s last breath
You are a snail as fast as a Formula 1 racing car
You are the bee’s sting
You are a crow laughing
You are the taste of an out of date date who went on a date, who’s out of date date was the date of 23rd November
You are the sound of a fire crackling
You are the distance between life and death
You are the ding before the ****
You are the angels song
You are tomorrow around the bend
You are this story’s end.
It’s a very good poem. Well done. But I think you could have thought about different words you could use. Why did you make line 5 so long?