The Rainbow-Sunflower
The Rainbow-Sunflower shimmers like gold, it’s stem like a steal rod, it’s petals pointing towards the end of the Rainbow, the petals are blanketed in crystals that glimmer in the winter sun.
The leaves reflect an image of a Leprechaun jumping joyfully in his Hobbit Home, gold coins scattered on the furniture.
The stem stood as still as a Statue, like a tall and winding Lighthouse, with several balconies at the top.
The Rainbow-Sunflower glistened like a fortune telling Crystal ball, leading me to my destiny.
Hi Basma, we really like the description, I think it was very powerful and engaging.
What gave you the inspiration to do a rainbow sunflower?
maybe it might be even better if you extended it more?
Lorna & Flora, THS
Hi Basma,
I love your poem.
I liked the use of the word ‘glimmer’ it is much more unusual than shines.
Mrs. Hinks
I could have added more detail to the last line?
You created some lovely images. I like the idea of the petals pointing to the end of the rainbow and your final verse, where the Rainbow Flower is leading you to your destiny, super work!